Hieroglyphic narrative

This is a narraitve that I have done recently.

Vans peril

Once upon a time there was a little boy called Van. He was obsessed with Quail chicks. Which looked like the girl of his dreams.

The week Van went to the zoo with his Grandmother he wanted to see the big scary lions. Just before they got to the lion exhibit a vulture flew by and grabbed Van's basket. Which was full of quail chicks. But Van held onto his basket firmly and flew off with the vulture.

The only thing that was holding van on was his quail chicks.  Three hours later. Van started see to an island on the island he saw even more lions, but these ones were wild. There were more vultures circling around a few dead lions. Van held onto the basket for dear life, as the vulture nosed dived straight towards the dead lions.

“Oh crap” whispered Van to the quail chicks as they descended onto the lion carcass. Van quickly scrambled away from the devious vulture that kidnaped him.

Later that day van started to wonder what happened to the quail chicks then it hit him (literally) a wall of quail chick guts went straight at his face. Just as he looked up he saw the vulture staring holes into his head. Then turned around excluding the pressure then he saw it the most beautiful pirate ship he has ever seen just on the coast of the island. Manning the ship was quail chicks and van saw the woman of his dreams.

The End